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Internal pages: Something like: [2][3]). Such pages are not fluff, but can be good places to find recruits for the project, possibly including subject-matter experts, especially if cross-referenced to the project. Also, Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Cue sports (cf. [4][5][6]).
Create timelines, both textual and graphical. See link for various guidelines and examples. We need an overall one for cue sports generally, and more specific ones as we drill down into more specific topics (timeline of nine-ball, timeline of Willie Mosconi's career, etc.).
Form sections: Exhibition game needs section on cue sports; could later form a new article with "Main article..." xref to it. What other general articles need cue sports sections?
Images: improve articles with images from commons; create pics and add them to commons as GFDL/CC-by/PD.
Add: {{Sport overview}} to main articles of cue games that are real sports; medal table tags where they apply (see Ding Junhui for example).
Insert: Cue sports events (tournament results, etc.) into the "year in sports" categories (e.g. 1965 in sports), using {{subst:Cue sports heading}} if that year doesn't have one yet.
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"The 2019 Shanghai Masters was a professional non-ranking snooker tournament that took place in Shanghai, China from 9 to 15 September 2019." - perhaps a mention of the location within Shanghai that the tournament was played in?
"The event was the 12th Shanghai Masters event, first held in 2007." - more grammatically correct; It was the 12th edition of the Shanghai Masters, which was first held in 2007.
"The prize fund for the event was at a total of £751,000" - I would say that The total prize fund was £751,000 is an improvement in terms of conciseness
"The Shanghai Masters is an invitational non-ranking snooker tournament open to the top 16 ranked players on the World Snooker Tour as well as selected Chinese players. The players consist of the top-16 in the world rankings after the 2019 International Championship, as well as eight Chinese players. The invited Chinese players include four players not ranked in the top-16 in the world rankings, two players from the Chinese Billiard Snooker Association under-21 rankings and two from China’s Amateur Masters series." - This whole portion of text will require citations to verify the information
"The defending champion was Ronnie O'Sullivan who won the 2018 event defeating Barry Hawkins 11-9 in the final." - by beating Barry Hawkins 11–9 in the final.
"Each invited Chinese player played one of the players seeded 9-16 in the first round." - World Snooker does not specially state this. Snooker.org does though, so that source should be used here
The highest break and the total prize fund figures are not mentioned in the two sources attached to it. Another source is required to verify it
total fund was easy to source, but couldn't find one for the highest break, so I've removed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(talk • contribs) 19:55, 13 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The tournament was held from 9 to 15 September 2019. The first round featured 9-16 seeded players against Chinese players." - both of these sentences are not attached to any citations to verify them. They require one so that the information can be checked to see if it is correct
"Shaun Murphy defeated Jack Lisowski 6-1 in the quarter-final, before playing Mark Allen in the semi-final. Allen had defeated World Champion Judd Trump also 6-1 in the last quarter-final." - These two sentences are not mentioned in the World Snooker source attached to them. Please use another citation.
"including a break of 124 " - not mentioned by either the Eurosport nor the World Snooker draw sheet scores. Please find or use another source to verify the break of 124
"Murphy won both frame 18 and 19 with breaks of 82" - Nothing in the Eurosport source that states Shaun Murphy made a break of 82 in frame 18. Another reference is required here
"Barry Hawkins completed the highest break of the event, a 142." - better; Barry Hawkins completed the tournament's highest break of 142 in the fourth frame of his second round match against John Higgins.
Overall there are sections of text that are not verified because they have the incorrect reference attached to it or not mentioned by the sources at all. There are also some references which are duplicates of another and prose issues are present. Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96(talk) 14:06, 12 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review, MWright! I think I got it all. Just doing a little bit of formatting, and it should be good to go. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(talk • contribs) 20:08, 13 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]